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你是不是觉得自己写申请信，绞尽脑汁也不知道该写什么才能提高被录取的砝码?近日，一封写给芝加哥大学的申请信，被审核直接通过，立即录取，火遍申请圈。你看看人家是怎么写的，好好反省反省吧! 在回答“为什么我们学校, 我们专业，为什么录取你”这类问题时，这才叫声情并茂啊!

"11669">原文如下： "Dear University of Chicago,

It fills me up with that gooey sap you feel late at night when I think

about things that are really special to me about you. Sometimes I just hunger

for more, but I keep that a secret. The mail you send is such a tease; I like to

imagine additional words on the page. Words like "you're accepted" or "you're

awesome!" or "don't worry, she still loves you!" but I know they're all lies.

You never called after that one time, I visited you thrice, but you never come

around anymore. Tell me, was I just one in a line of many? Was I just another

supple "applicant" to you, looking for a place to live, looking for someone to

teach me the ways of the world? The closeness between us was beautiful, it

couldn't have been just me that felt it, I know you felt it too. The intimacy

was akin to that of scholar and original text, your depth as a person is

astounding! To be honest, I must confess I had already dreamt of a rosy future

together, one filled with late nights and long discussions over the Gothic era

and the ethical stage of Kierkegaard, we would watch the sunset together and

spend every Christmas snuggled in blankets. Eventually we would get older, I

would become a well-educated corporate lawyer and you would enrich yourself

within the domain of human knowledge. Your cup overfloweth with academic genius,

pour a little on me. You're legendary for it, they all told me it would never

work out between us, but I had hope. I had so much hope; I replied to your

adorable letters and put up with your puns. I knew going into it that you would

be an expensive one to keep around, I accounted for all that; I understand

someone of your caliber and taste. And now you inquire as to my wishes? They're simple, accept me for who I

am! Why can't you just love and not ask why? Not ask about my assets or my past?

I'm living in the now, I'm waiting for you to catch up, but you're too caught up

in my past, I offer us a future together, not a past to dwell upon. Whenever I'm

around you, I just get that tingle deep inside me that tells me you're the one;

you have that air of brilliance and ingenuity that I crave in a person, you're

so mature and sophisticated, originality is really your strongest and most

admirable trait. I wish we could be together, I still think in my heart of

hearts we were meant to be, but you have to meet me halfway, dear. I'm on one

knee here with tears welling up in my eyes, the fireworks are timed and ready to

light up the night sky for you, just say 'I accept...you.'

Always,

Rohan"

P.S. This was in response to the question: How does the University of

Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of

learning, community and future? DO NOT see this as a blueprint, but one of many

types of essays we get. Be yourself!