伦敦大学金史密斯学院2017文书范文分享 这么多课外活动申不上算我输!

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伦敦大学金史密斯学院(Goldsmiths, University of London)是英国首屈一指的以艺术与设计、文化及社会科学见长的学府，其中新闻传播、戏剧电影等专业则蜚声海外，为学校赢得了更大的荣誉。本文将带来成功申请该校2017年经济学专业的文书一篇，来看看英国有名的“金匠”学院招生官看中了申请者哪些品质。

传送门>>>>>>2017年UCAS系统文书范文汇总 热门高校PS范文等你来(火速更新中) The dynamic consumer society we live in is governed by many different

factors, which I have developed a fascination for. I have become aware of how

all markets have strategies, for instance oligopolies which operate in retail,

first degree discrimination within auction sites and tacit collusion in the

energy industry. I continually strive to develop my understanding of the economy

and this pursuit has served to widen my knowledge and led to success in all of

my early opportunities.

点评：开篇首句浅谈对消费社会的看法，并吐露了喜爱之情。对经济初步形成的认识促进其继续深入地了解。

This journey began whilst completing a Certificate in Personal Finances

during Year 9, which gave me my first in-depth insight into the industry. I

achieved the highest mark in my school at BCS and therefore was given the

opportunity to study early AS Business Studies – something I was ecstatic to

undertake. I also chose Financial Literacy Level 3 as a way of delving deeper

into the financial world, where my aptitude resulted in my mark being in the top

1% nationally. My apposite A-level choices have given me a sound foundation in

consumer rationale, whilst offering different insights into socio-economic

issues. They have enhanced my communication and analytical skills, and have also

taught me new transferable skills, such as debating and evaluation.

点评：这一段谈在学校进行的经济学相关学习，包括在9年级拿到个人理财证书，交代在学校的学习成绩以及获得的早期AS商业学习机会，还有金融素养上的学习。

I recently attended a lecture by Professor Stephen Walt of Harvard

University, at the London School of Economics and Political Science, which posed

the question: ‘Does Europe have a future?’. I found myself fascinated by the

success of Europe’s history, which Walt contrasted with the current fundamental

challenges the EU faces. Being in this environment captivated me and further

sparked my desire to attend university.

点评：举了一个实例：参加哈佛大学经济学教授的讲座。重点是谈自己的收获与感悟，

I have taken every opportunity to further my experience within the financial

world. Shadowing a director at a FTSE 100 company, CAPITA, enabled me to apply,

further and adapt the knowledge and skills I had already learnt. I developed my

communication skills greatly, boosting both my confidence and my

professionalism. I attended a strategy meeting which discussed how a loss of

revenue affects an organisation; it became apparent how critical skill

redeployment and communication are to a company’s success. An opportunity to

join the Research and Design team at BluePrint Collections gave me an awareness

of how smaller-scale businesses are run. By producing prototypes and helping to

develop the company’s social media presence, I boosted my teamwork skills and

attention to detail.

点评：学习之外，申请者主要谈了经济学相关的实习研究经历，包括在FTSE 100 company(一家金融公司)做董事，和参与BluePrint

Collections公司的商业研究。这些经历都加深了申请者对经济学的认识，锻炼了相关的团队协作和沟通能力。

I am an ‘Events Prefect’ which involves organising prom along with termly

Sixth Form socials. This gives me the opportunity to collaborate, enhance my

ability to cope well under pressure and, if necessary, assume a managerial

position. I am a member of Leventhorpe Debating Society, which helps me to

formulate and structure cogent arguments. Last year, I was awarded two

Headmaster’s Commendations, for English Literature and Financial Studies, which

exemplifies how my passion drives me to succeed in everything I participate in.

I have been recognised as a Community Youth Champion, which involved delivering

a coherent presentation on youth crime to a large audience including the local

council, police and fire departments. Despite having a birth defect in my back,

I participate in charity runs which demonstrates my determination to overcome

any barriers I face. Running and keeping active takes me out of the somewhat

stressful and intense environment A level’s are in.

点评：这段是申请者的社会实践经历，可以看出申请者参加的社会活动还是很丰富的，很符合“Events

Prefect”这一身份，这一段是比较出彩的，且每个活动都非常亮眼。

I believe there is a lot that I can bring to the thriving university

community. I recognise that there are many challenges that lie ahead, however I

am capable of overcoming these as my interest in the Business world consistently

drives me to succeed. Having developed a strong foundation of the economy, I am

looking to build on this in a dynamic environment which will enable me to

achieve my full potential.

点评：最后升华总结，进一步表达对申请专业的喜爱和美好愿景。

纵观整篇文书，申请者较突出的亮点是在实习和实践上，因此其花了两大段的篇幅进行描述，这样做能够提高招生官关注申请者的机会，当然光是简单罗列活动太不行，最重要的是能扯到经济学习，谈自己的相关收获与成长。

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