怎样避免SAT写作句子太空洞？论SAT写作中的句子的可读性

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今天小编要为大家讲到的是SAT写作中的句子的可读性。

1.一些空洞的单词或词组不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

When

all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than

those of their parents，in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when

all things are considered”和“in my opinion”都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：Young adults of today

live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2.

有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due

to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their

parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in

time.

“due

to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because

our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the

options that young people have now.

所以说在SAT作文写作中如果频繁使用空洞的单词和词组，让你的句子看起来很长，但是却失去了可读性，让评分老师会觉得你这样写很刻意而不自然，我们在SAT作文中一定要避免出现这种问题。