托福独立写作真题范文-新闻要天天看么--

2024-04-26

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托福独立写作真题范文|新闻要天天看么??

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2019.10.12(上午)独立写作题目

“Therearemanynewsstoriesaboutcurrenteventsthathelppeopletakeabreakfromreadingorlisteningtothenewsforafewdaysorweeks.

托福独立写作真题范文-新闻要天天看么--

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Itisbeneficialtostopreadingandlisteningtothenewsforafewdaysorweeks.”

写作范文

解读题目是难点:

newsstories和news是有什么区别么?

笔者的解读:

1)newsstories会去探究某个新闻事件背后的来龙去脉和各种细节。比如西方国家比较有名的《60minutes》,是解读新闻事件背后的具体事情的,就内容而言,比简单的newsreporting详细。

2)而news呢,就是纯粹的新闻播报,是流水账。粗线条的方式告诉读者、观众或者听众*近发生了什么,而不会去探究新闻事件背后的具体情况,比如央视的《新闻联播》。

3)然而,题目的提问部分,又没有针对newsstories提问。所以,搞不清楚newsstories和news的区别,仿佛也不要紧,只要针对题目的提问部分展开讨论就可以了。

以下是示范文:

Introduction

Newsreporting,initssimplestway,hasonlyaheadlineandasummaryofanevent.Insuchnews,detailsareomitted.Readingorviewingsuchnewsmaybeexhausting,sincetherearesomanythingshappenonadailybasis,andthebrowsingmaybesorepetitiveandtediousthatpeopleneedabreak.

Body

其实可以把body部分的段的内容和introduction形成逻辑联系,让全文更有整体感→Theboredomisnotyettheworstcase.Whatisworseisinformationoverload,andbombardedwithinformation,wefeelexhausted.Thismaybecontrarytothecommonconceptionthatknowledgeispower.Indeed,knowingthingsmakesusfeelsecure.Ontheotherhand,knowingtoomuchisexhausting,sinceweoftenareunabletoconfineourmindstojustknowingsomething.Whennewsprovokesourthoughts,ourmindsmaybedisturbed,byourinterpretationsoftheeventsorbybadassociationsfortheevents.Ifthoseinterpretationsorassociationsareundesirable,weneedtotakeabreak,stopreceivingthenewsorawhile,toescapefromtherealityandtodetachourselvesfromtheworldforsometime.←说理很难,双例映证→Forexample,whennewstellsusthatthehousingpricesaresurging,wemaynothavethesimplestideathat“wow,propertiesaregettingexpensive”butthinkthat“Imayneveraffordahomeandbehomeless”.Newsmayreportacheerfuleventthatanunprivilegedstudenthasmanagedtoenteraprestigiouscollege.However,wemayhaveassociationsforthecountry’scollegeadmissionsystemanditsinequality.

Also,newsseemstobeobsessedwithtragicevents.Tragediesontheonehanddrawattention,andontheotherhand,causediscomfortoranxiety.Long-termexposuretosuchnewsupsetspeople.Itdepressespeople,causingnegativefeelingslikedisappointmentandpessimism.Forexample,xxxxxxxxxxxx(很容易找到例子去论证此点,此处例子略。)

Conclusion

Weneedtotakeabreakandstopreceivingnewsforamoment.Ashortintervaleverynowandthenwillbreakthepatternofconstantinformationbombardmentandkeepusalive.

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