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All university students should be required to take basic science courses

even if they are not in their field of study.

Introduction

The era of digital arouses the interest in popularizing science courses

such as physics or mathematics. The advocators insist its pragmatism for every

college student; I am, however, skeptical about such claim.

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Body

To begin with, unlike other levels of study, university is a setting for

major research, which means students choose the direction they are willing to

attach importance rather than building up fundamental academic

background.【注意这里用长句做关键句提前把说理铺陈出来】It is ubiquitous for those who are good at arts

to abandon the scientific subjects. I am definitely the best exemplification for

this. Being the lame duck in mathematics, I chose English major as an

alternative in order to get rid of advanced math course. It turned out that

without the obstacle in passing math exams, I was available enough to elevate my

language learning. If I were mandated to science courses even just at elementary

level, there would be another story that the obscure formulas or theory can

drive me anxious the whole the semester.【适当用一个具体例子说明】

Also, hardly can learning the basic concepts in science subjects be

productive as desired. The compulsory education ranging from primary school to

middle school has been offering students the knowledge from science. Almost all

required skills are imparted when students are at their juvenile ages, which

means allocating undergraduates'time for these is repetitive and a waste of

time. 【先因果论证进行说理】Worse, the idea will end up with students’ rebellion, which is

definitely counter-productive. In many universities, courses once becoming

public required would encounter the awkward situation in which the rate of

absence and sneak-off is quite high, not to mention the

teaching.【采用抽象例子进行递进论证】

True, courses of science are of great workability for the integrated

quality of students. Some even underscore the implication by stating that all

the students can utilize the logical thinking behind these subjects. Although

not entirely groundless, it lacks sound evidence in that learning is a myriad of

competence and solely arranging basic concepts in science is no way the master

key.【最后用一个小让步段补充逻辑】

Ending

In a nutshell, practical as science courses may be, it is unreasonable to

ask all university students to take them.【收尾简洁利索】