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题目:

Do you agree or disagree: it is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems rather than asking others for advice.

二选一，一类被同学们自认为信手拈来的托福写作题型，可一不小心就会掉进出题;婶婶;的陷阱里。先来看看本期写作批改专栏，投稿选中的幸运儿写的段落吧。

First, using their own knowledge and experience to solve problems can exercise their ability of independent thinking. When people are in trouble, they can analyze the problem and think about the solution by themselves. This process can exercise their independent thinking ability, long-term will be able to form a good habit of their own independent thinking. Take my brother as an example. When he encountered problems since he was a child, he would try to solve them by himself first, and would only ask his parents if he was really unable. Now he is also excellent in his work, because his independent thinking ability is outstanding in the workplace.

讲真，抛开语法不说，这位小同学上课还是很认真的。主题句，解释句，例证一个不落，值得表扬。但读完之后的感受就是：似懂非懂，似对非对。那么问题出在哪儿呢？

1.问题诊断

题目：用自己的知识和经验来解决问题比问别人的意见更好吗？

Debbie OS：不管选同意或不同意，都应谈及支持方的好处，这一点不难，课上讲过嘛

学生观点：我同意，因为用自己的知识和经验可以锻炼独立思考的能力。

Debbie OS：嘿，回答得不错，观点挺powerful嘛

学生解释：自己想就可以锻炼独立思考的能力。

Debbie OS：等下，让我捋捋，好像说的不是一回事？自己想=用自己的知识和经验解决问题？

学生例子：我哥自己解决问题，在工作上很杰出

Debbie OS：嗯？自己解决问题，所以你哥工作杰出？我是谁？我在哪里？我在看什么？

如果自己想问题就可以解决问题，然后可以成功，那Debbie现在可能已经站在金字塔顶端了。这位同学可能自己解释起来也有点心虚，加了一句;would only ask his parents if he was really unable; 。以Debbie的拙见，可能是在他解决不了自己问题的时候才会问父母。(还有这个unable，用的太突然了，啥是unable，unable 都要跟to do 连用哦) 所以整半天还是要问父母？题目不是问你要不要问别人，你不是丑拒了吗？读到这里, Debbie 想可能还是问别人意见好吧，你这个还真不是自己解决问题。

综上，Debbie给出如下诊断：推理逻辑有漏洞，未解释清楚用自己经验解决问题如何可以锻炼独立思考的能力

另外，补充个小问题，brother就是自己的哥哥哈，不是表哥，表哥是cousin，当你说你的哥哥问his parents的时候，不像Debbie这么灵活的考官就有点懵了

2.示范及总结

First, using their own knowledge and experience to solve problems can exercise their ability of independent thinking.When people analyze problems independently, they need to figure out every step towards finally achieving a satisfying resolution. They have to come up with answers in response to unexpected obstacles, and weigh the pros and cons of all possible solutions.This process canimprovetheir independent thinking abilityandform a good habit ofthinking on their own in the long run.Take mycousinas an example.When he has trouble formulating an optimum strategy for rivaling his opposing counsels in court, he would write out all the possibilities on a piece of paper, and examine each scenario thoroughly before reaching an ideal conclusion. In this way, he would be prepared for any objections he would encounter, and take precautions a step ahead. Relying on his own knowledge and experience to solve problems serves as an instrumental practice to his independent thinking skills and eventually helps them solve thousands of unprecedented emergencies that no one has answers to.