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2023.12.1 独立写作题目

“When we spend money to do charity, which one of the following ways do you

think is better?

1. Give money to charitable organizations and let them decide how the money

will be spent;

2. Give money directly to the needy so that we can decide how the money is

spent.

And why?”

写作范文

经典“二选一”题型

Introduction

在开头段落里，内容的进展要快，要少废话：When I make donations, I donate the money to charitable

organizations rather than to the needy directly. ←

句话既说明了题目也表达了立场。第二句话做一些简单的(不要提前透露主体部分的具体内容的)补充 → I believe that my money is in

good hands [词汇特殊要求：use of idioms] when it is managed by those professional

organizations.

Body

Those organizations do philanthropy in a professional way. ← 中心句之后展开 → The

expense of money is based on their careful calculation, including to what area

or group of people and what amount is appropriate. In addition, a charitable

organization does not work alone. Instead, it may cooperate with a number of

partners, such as food suppliers, construction companies, book publishers, and

the cooperation makes the donations more

effective.此刻决定写不写例子。决定不写，因为当道理已经讲述到明白的时候，例子就显得多余。← 写出contrast(对比)是“二选一”类型题目的论证关键

→ The opposite is the case of an individual donor. ← 中心句之后展开 → An individual is

unable to do charity that way. 直接用例子论证 → For example, when a generous donator

gives money to a poor family, he or she probably has no idea of what amount

would be appropriate, and the donation is likely to be either excessive

orinadequate. In addition, the cash may not be what the poor need. Instead, what

they need may be foodstuff with which they can feed the family,shelters they can

immediately move in, or books they can read. ← 经典的对比结构。

← 注意两个段落的展开方式不一样 →

When an individual does charity, he or she may do it locally and can do it

only in the locality. In comparison, there may be no restraint oflocality when a

charitable institution does the work. ← 先完成宏观的比较关系，然后再展开 → Generous as a donor

may be, the donor may not be able to give the money to people who are not in his

town or country, because there may be a lack of time for the donor to travel or

a lack of information about where, outside his locality, the money is needed. ←

写出contrast(对比)是“二选一”类型题目的论证关键 → Unlike this generous donor as an individual, a

charitable organization may be nationwide or global and has branches in

different parts of a country or the world. 此刻决定写不写例子。决定写: For example, the Red

Cross, a major philanthropic organization of China, have franchises that cover

the whole country–the widest scale and the scale that no individual person could

ever have.

Conclusion

在结尾段落里，内容的进展要快，要少废话：

Therefore, I tend to donate money to charitable organizations rather than

to the needy directly. The principle behind the reasons is simple: those

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