4月24日雅思大作文真题参考范文 I 传统食物被国际快餐所取代
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2021年4月24雅思大作文题目
In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast
food. This will have negative effects on both families and societies. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思大作文范文及解析
01、Just as globalization has taken the world by storm(征服,攻占), so
international fast food has proliferated(迅速扩散) across the globe. As a result,
many traditional foods are being supplanted(代替) by foreign fast food(复述题目). In
my opinion, this phenomenon has a detrimental(有害的) effect on families and
societies, but is not as much of a threat as it may seem at first
glance(陈述观点).
02、International fast food has a major advantage over most traditional
foods, which is the considerable resources that a parent corporation may bring
to bear to advertise, secure supply chains and push out local competition. For
example, in China, the local mom-and-pop food stalls(摊位) which have
traditionally served local staples(主食) cannot afford the spiking(激增) commercial
rents once foreign competitors offer vast sums to landlords to lease restaurant
spaces. In addition, the near-constant stream of advertising from chains such as
McDonald’s worms their way into(潜入) the social consciousness incessantly, making
the mom-and-pop shops appear quaint or antiquated. (观点的前半部分——对家庭和社会不利——的理由一)
03、As a result of these international chains moving in, it can become
increasingly difficult to find the local delicacies which once thrived. This can
lead to certain negative effects on society and families, such as a loss or
dilution of cultural heritage as traditional foods become scarce. Similarly,
families may be affected as the cost of food increases when international fast
foods eliminate cheaper alternatives. Indeed, countries such as China and India
have experienced rising food costs over the years due in part to foreign chains
taking up larger shares of the market. (观点的前半部分——对家庭和社会不利——的理由二)
04、However, while this all sounds scary on paper, and it has been
problematic to a certain extent, there is a strong pushback against
international fast foods which prevents them from causing too much damage to
families or societies. In the example of China, because many local foods remain
far less expensive than their foreign counterparts, and families adhere to a
strong belief that fast foods are unhealthy, traditional foods maintain their
popularity. Also, international fast-food chains do not always successfully
entice the local palate(味道), and do not necessarily beat out the local
competitors for customers. (观点的后半部分——坏处不大——的论证)
05、While it is reasonable to fear the level of competitive marketing and
financial clout(势力) that international fast-food chains can employ when entering
a country, local families and societies are not in much danger(复述观点). These
foreign foods simply provide another edible option to the local populace, and at
worst motivate sellers of traditional foods to improve their own business
strategies to compete.
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