9分考官级雅思大作文范文之电脑游戏利弊

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本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a

useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having

an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks

of video games outweigh the

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范文：

Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While

I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I

believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users,

or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and

engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games

encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking

and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context.

Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’

motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a

plane.

However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.

Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new

targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours

each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher

score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from

lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more

hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also

been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often

accompany gaming addiction.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are

more significant than the possible benefits.

(258 words, band 9)