【易伯华出品】2016年8月20日雅思G类写作大作文范文

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Task：Some people believe that private schools should not be allowed because it is an unfair advantage.What is your opinion?

有人认为私立学校不允许存在，因为它们存在不公平的优势，你的观点呢？

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Some people argues that it is unreasonable for private school to exist as

students in these school are enjoying more advantages than students in other

schools. However, I completely disagree with this idea.

Firstly, Education is a kind of resource, and people pay to obtain resource.

It is similar to purchasing a product at the market. People pay more because

they expect products with high quality and functions. And private schools are

usually more expensive than public schools just because they have the ability to

provide better education. Parents have spent a great amount of money on

education for their children, their kids are supposed to enjoy a decent

education resource than what they can get from other schools.

Secondly, the supplements private schools provide are mostly focused on

extra-curricular activities, aiming to enhance their ability in a well-around

aspects instead of increasing their score in the final examination that students

from all schools should take. For example, many private schools have sports

games, in which students need to have good physical capability and to cooperate

with other members. And their teamwork ability is trained as well as their

bodies.

Finally, cancelling private schools are unfair to the poor, as there will be

less vacancies for children from impecunious families if all students have to go

to public schools. Children with well-off family background can have an

alternative choice, which can provide more places in public schools for students

who have no choice.

In conclusion, to some extent, children in private schools can get more

benefits as their parents paid more for their education opportunity, however, it

is not beneficial to the society as a whole to forbid private schools.

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