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为大家带来11月11日场雅思写作小作文范文，真题：The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world. Compare and contrast.小作文范文及范文解析见下文：

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原创雅思小作文高分范文：

The bar charts compare the average amount of protein and calorie intake by

people from four regions of the world.

It is noticeable that people in North America take most protein into their

bodies, with 62 grams of animal protein and 18 grams of other protein and the

overall quantity is almost double that of protein intake by Latin American

(45grams). Meanwhile, their animal protein intake is approximately at half of

that by North American. However, the intake of protein in India and East Africa

is much less, at around 30 grams among which they share the same amount of other

protein intake (15grams).

Regarding to average intake of calories, the figure for North America is over

the ideal calorie intake, standing at 3500 kilocalories and for Latin America is

2800 kilocalories, close to ideal intake ( 3000 kilocalories). By contrast,

there are only 2000 kilocalories intake for people in India.

Overall, it can be seen that average intake of protein and calories of North

American both exceed the ideal standards whereas that for Indian are the lowest

among those areas.(182 words)

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雅思写作小作文高分语料：

It is noticeable that… 明显的是…

be almost double that of… 几乎是…的两倍

be approximately at half of… 几乎是…的一半

share the same amount of 有同样的量

regarding to… 至于…

stand at… 到达…

close to… 接近…

Overall, it can be seen that 总的来说，可以看出…

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