支招小作文 | 惊了!表里没几个数字~

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雅思小作文题目

The table below shows the changes of the percentage of visitors in 8 great

countries that most international tourists visited in 2009 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

惊了?惊了!见惯了满眼数字的表，没见过表里仅有8个数字。很慌，很方，很正常。

定睛一看，分组其实依然很明晰：

1. 正数 即增长的(有多有少);

2. 负数 即下降的;

3. 零 即没变的。

范文及解析

In the table is the statistical presentation ← “数据化呈现”，是一种高bigger的说法 of the

changed popularity with visitors, in percentage terms ←“以百分比计算”, of 8 Great

Countries between 2009 and 2010.

Except the UK, 引导数值的从句句型之一(定语从句)→ which saw a 4-percent slightslip in the

number of visitors, and France, whose popularity stayed

unchanged,←考虑到“负数组”仅一个，“零组”也仅有一个，所以干脆上来就把这两个写完，然后专心写“正数组”→ the other

countries witnessed either a surge or amarginal increase of popularity. Germany

stood out, 引导数值的从句句型之二(状语从句)→ as its number of tourists shot up, and had the

fastest growth. In the US and China, the other two most desired tourist

destinations, the number of visitors also grew fast

←要敢于不写具体数字，而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势. Meanwhile, the 6-percent growth in Spain is

also noticeable, and the insignificant growth in Turkey and Italy ←

要敢于不写具体数字，而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势 contrasted sharply with the three previous

countries.

Overall, the change of popularity between the two years varied markedly

from one country to another.