2017年12月2日雅思写作小作文原创范文及解析
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为大家带来2017年12月2日雅思写作真题范文之小作文:The pie charts below show the proportion graduate
with science degree and art degree in a company in 1990 and 2010.Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons
where relevant.写作范文及解析如下:
1.范文解析:本次小作文是一个动态的饼图。注意主要信息点总体趋势,极值和数据的对比。
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2.雅思小作文范文
The two pie charts compare how many graduates in a specific company earned

three different levels of Science and Art degree in two years(1990 and
2010).
In 1990, the proportion of graduates holding first degree of Art and Science
was the same, both accounting for exactly 18%. By contrast, these figures
enjoyed a significant growth by 2010 when they represented at 24% and 27%
respectively,outnumbering that of Master of degree, including Art and
Science.
As many as 25% and 20% of graduates in 1990 received their Master Degree of
Art and Science separately, a little higher than that of the First and PHD
Degree . However, Master Degree of Art since then suffered a sharp drop of up to

10% while the fall of the Master of Science Degree slowed to 17% in the year
2010.
It is noticeable that far fewer graduates in this company had received PHD of
Science and Art within this decade, all below 12%. There was a only 1% rise in
PHD of Science(from 7%-8%) but the 1990-2010 period witnessed a slight fall from
12% to 9% in that of Art.
Overall, although most graduates had Master of Degree in 1990, the First
Degree predominated ten years later, with the percentage of PHD Degree always
remaining the lowest across this 10-year period.(196words)
3.高分表达:
How many graduates earned 多少毕业生获得了...
Both accounting for 两者都占据...(独立主格)
outnumber 数量上超过
It is noticeable that 值得注意的是
The ...period witnessed a fall... 某一段时间 有一个下降趋势
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