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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee
and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries
have been paid an officially agreed fair price.
范文:
The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade coffee and bananas in
two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five European
countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in
three out of the five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels
of spending on the two products.
In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at €3
million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at €15
million. By 2004, however, sales of Fairtrade coffee in the UK had risen to €20
million, and this was over three times higher than Switzerland’s sales figure
for Fairtrade coffee in that year. The year 2004 also saw dramatic increases in
the money spent on Fairtrade bananas in the UK and Switzerland, with revenues
rising by €32 million and €4.5 million respectively.
Sales of the two Fairtrade products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and
Sweden. Small increases in sales of Fairtrade coffee can be seen, but revenue
remained at €2 million or below in all three countries in both years. Finally,
it is noticeable that the money spent on Fairtrade bananas actually fell in
Belgium and Sweden.
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