【易伯华版写作范文】2018年2月24日场雅思写作真题范文

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2月24日雅思考试已经结束，为大家带来本场雅思大作文写作真题：As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars.Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages

for environment?随着国家的发展，越来越多的人购买和使用他们自己的汽车。这种趋势对个人的好处大于对环境的不利影响吗?

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雅思写作真题范文解析

解析：本题为生活类话题。越来越多的人购买私家车，对于个人的优点是否重于对环境带来的缺点?该题与2016年9月15日的考题完全一致。总体来说，本体题干易于理解，但是考生容易再想观点时思路受限，仅能想到一个优点和一个缺点。审题时，考生需关注题干中的优点限定为“个人”方面，缺点限定为“环境”方面，那么环境又可以分为自然环境和社会或人文环境。

写作文章结构

paragraph 1 : 结合背景引入话题且表明这种趋势具备优点和缺点。

paragraph 2: 论述越来越多的私家车给个人带来的优势。

paragraph 3: 论述越来越多的私家车给环境方面带来的劣势。

Paragraph 4: 分别总结主体段阐述过的优缺点。

雅思写作真题范文

With affordability of cars and more disposable incomes of most families,

recent decades have seen an increase in the number of people who purchase and

own their own cars. There would seem to be clear benefits for individuals and

drawbacks to environment.

The first point to make is that there are some merits to increasing purchases

of private cars for individuals. For one, cars allow for more convenience and

mobility on a daily basis. Regarding convenience, cars are accessible for people

right in the garage or near their houses, instead of making one’s way to a bus

stop or train station, saving a great amount of time. In terms of mobility,

people could commute or travel to a faraway place. For example, people could

travel to outer suburbs that are poorly serviced by public transport,even where

it is available but can be prohibitively expensive. For another, cars give a

much greater degree of comfort and shelter. When suffering severe whether while

travelling, people have a warmer and cleaner room to stay in, without waiting

out in the open bus stop or crowded railway station, which seems to be

impossible in a public transport.

There are, of course, negative aspects to buying excessive cars. Based on

environment side, firstly, more pedestrians accidents have been reported

annually. As the usage of private cars increases, it is more probable that

people walking through the street are killed by being exposed to a multitude of

cars. Safety was universal and unquestioned but today it is no exaggeration to

say that one false move, just one distracted or unguarded step could result in

result or injury. Apart from accidents, it is not uncommon that more cars entail

severe environmental pollution with air and noise pollution involved. It is

reported that the automobile is responsible for up to 80 percent of urban air

pollution that chokes our cities, being the culprit of global warming. If the

number of cars remains on the rise widely, the figure for city dwellers who

suffer from respiratory disorders would surge beyond projections. As noise

pollution is concerned, it exerts an adverse impact on people’s hearings and

mental health.

As has been seen, there are major benefits to owning more cars, not least

because they facilitate people’s life and can be more flexible. This is

balanced, however, by the fact that this trend affects the environment

negatively by causing fatal accidents and too much pollution.

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