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今天我们来看一篇大作文，题目如下：

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people,

while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.

Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

首先，大家都知道，按照写作评分标准，要求大家在写作的时候尽量做到词汇多变。接下来就来训练一下，先把题目中三个关键词相关的词语都写出来：

Museums:

· exhibition, exhibit (verb, like 'show'), an exhibit (noun, 'item'),

artifact, object, collection, history, science, art, culture, visitors, members

of the public, public viewing...

Entertain:

· entertainment, entertaining, enjoy, enjoyment, enjoyable, have fun,

interesting, fascinating, spectacular, impressive, leisure time, free time, a

day out, tourist attraction...

Educate:

· education, educational, teach, learn, explain, understand, know,

gain/expand/pass on/transmit knowledge, skills, experience, open your mind,

broaden your horizons...

Simon说，Making lists of related words is a good way to generate ideas. You

might not have time to do this in the exam, but it's a useful study

technique.列出相关词是一个培养思想的好办法，你可能在考试中没有时间做这件事，但是是一个有用的学习技巧。接下来大家写一下今天的作文，然后和范文对照。

完整范文：

People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my

opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.

On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to

entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a

collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average

visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much

educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment

rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually

spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its

exhibitions.

On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education.

The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did

not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s

exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some

museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other

museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about

the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching

people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.

In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an

interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun

and learn something at the same time.

(253 words, band 9)

词汇总结：

visually:视觉上地

spectacular: 壮观地，引人入胜地

interactive: 互动式的

previously: 之前地

headsets: 头戴式耳机

detailed: 详细的

commentary: 评论

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