雅思写作真题范文社会类话题--文化传统
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Task:Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are
used as money-making machines aims at tourists, other people believe that it is
the only way to save such conditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and
give your own opinion.
Sample answer:
The thriving of tourism depends on the integrated force, among which cultural
traditions are one of the selling points that has been hyped by many travel
agencies and the relevant participants in the sector. Although it is argued by
some advocates that cultural traditions can be well preserved by the money from
tourism, I take it with a pinch of salt.
One point that has to be made clear is that the diversity of cultural
traditions will be undermined if they are utilized to cater for the fleeting
need of travel industry. Only those cultural traditions which are popularly
welcomed and accepted by the tourists will be given priority and be well
preserved, and it means that the other counterparts bearing the same cultural
value will be put aside to some extent and gradually sink into oblivion. In this
way, the cultural traditions whose economic value are not so obvious are likely
to be less focused on and only a fraction of cultural traditions can survive in
the increasingly commercialized society.
Another point worth mentioning is that the original flavor of cultural
tradition will be distorted. Once the cultural traditions are mingled with
business, they are packed into more product than a pristine culture. To make the
cultural traditions more appealing and eye-catching to customers, some
information which has nothing to do with the tradition will be faked to ass more
glory and grandeur and the original taste of the culture will fade away.

It is true, of course, the money from tourists’ pocket can provide the
financial guarantee and support for the cultural traditions. More advertising
can be placed on mass media to proliferate the cultural traditions, and the
restoration and preservation of cultural traditions can be better ensured if
there are more funding being poured into.
To sum up, the essence of cultural traditions are somewhat irreconcilable
with commercialization and cultural traditions should be more conserved instead
of be tagged with price.

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