2017年10月28日雅思写作A类大作文原创范文

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为大家带来10月28日最新雅思写作范文，本场考试的题目是社会类话题，题目是：Nowadays, people can choose the place they live and work because of the development of communication technology and transport. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? 随着现代通讯技术和交通的发展，人们能够自主选择自己的居住地和工作地点，这是利大于弊的事吗？

大作文

类型

社会类

题目

Today, people

in many countries choose to work and live wherever they like thanks to

communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the

disadvantages?

范文解析

本题探讨了自由选择工作场所和居住地方的利弊。考生在拓展论点的步骤中应该不会存在疑惑或者阻碍，因为该话题比较日常。此外，词汇上也有比较多的发挥余地。总体来说，这道题目的难度系数并不大。

文章结构

paragraph 1

:结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

paragraph

2: 论述自由选择工作场所的优势。（分为在家办公和旅行办公两个层面）

paragraph 3: 论述自由选择住所的好处。（分为住在国内和国外两个层面）

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点，通过让步承认缺点，强调自己的观点。

高分话题表达（范文中已用红色标注）

owing to

归功于…

the advance

of

…的发展

be granted

chances to

被赋予…的机会

relieve from

daily commutes

从日常上下班中解放出来

traffic

congestion

交通阻塞

rush hours

高峰期

working

schedule

工作日程

homeworker

在家工作的人

attend

fitness class

参加健身课程

be subjected

to

受到，经受…

spark

inspiration and creativity

激发灵感和创造性

historical

relics

历史遗迹

humanistic

environment

人文环境

mountainous

areas

山区

coastal city

沿海城市

refreshing

and enlightening

使人耳目一新的有启发作用的

not to

mention

更不用说

elevate

skills

提高技能

feel isolated

from the society

感觉和社会脱节

change

dwellings

变换住所

boost working

efficiency

提高工作效率

enrich

people’s life experience

丰富个人经历

高分结构（范文中已用蓝色标注）

As far as I

am concerned, this tendency does lead to several desirable results.

在我看来，这个趋势产生了一些令人满意的结果

Without…，hardly can…

没有…的话，…是不行的

although

there is a concern that

尽管有…的

范文

Owing

to the convenience of modern means of

transportation and the advance of communication technology, a growing number of people are

granted chances to choose their ideal workplaces and residence. As far as I am concerned, this tendency does lead to

several desirable results.

The most

obvious is that employees can be relieved from daily commutes.

The long-distance communication as well as the internet technology provides

conditions for staff to work at home, in which case, there is no need to

spend hours on the way to offices, and suffer from the traffic congestion in rush hours.

Additionally, a flexible working schedule maintains the balance between career and life. Instead of sitting in a certain room, dealing with assignment

for fixed time frame, homeworkers can do

exercise or attend fitness class in the

morning; contact with clients and complete plans for projects in the

afternoon. Obviously, under such a circumstance, it is less likely for them to be subjected to huge stress from work, but increase

their general satisfaction with life. Furthermore, this working pattern sparks inspiration and creativity especially for

writers and designers. Without being immersed

in the wonder of nature or deeply appreciating the glamour of historical relics, hardly

can they create masterpieces.

Undeniably,

residing places people prefer to generate some merits and the first one is to experience diverse landscapes and appealing humanistic environment of other regions. Imagine

that how exciting for people from mountainous areas living in a coastal city. Besides, artistic

projects such as sculptures, public art and lifestyles of local people enable

newcomers to experience something refreshing and

enlightening. Not to mention those who

live abroad, their foreign language skills can

be elevated and horizons of culture can be

broadened.

In conclusion, although there is a concern that people may feel isolated from the society and live in an

unstable life if working at home for longer period or changing dwellings too often, I firmly believe that this modern

way of work and life boost working efficiency and enrich people’s life experience.

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