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Task：Information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian

children.

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思路解析：

1. 采用对比模式，着重进行组内部的比较，比如说Art and Carft组中的男女百分比的比较。

2. 注意重点数据的描述(Max, Min, eg. Watching TV=Max; Skateboarding=Min)。

3. 分段通过数据的对比产生，男女数据相同的一组，男大于女的一组，女大于男的一组。

参考范文：

The bar chart shows the favored leisure activities of Australian boys and

girls age 5-14. 5 aspects can be divided into 3 groups.

The first group includes Watching TV or videos, which was the most popular

leisure activity in all. Specifically, numbers of boys and girls both reach the

same level at 100%, which means TVs and Videos are always given the top priority

for amusement and universally favored by every child.

The second group consists of Skateboarding, Bike riding and Electronic or

Computer games, all of which attract more boys than girls. For example, in the

level of Skateboarding where the lowest percentage of both genders was found,

the number of boys accounted for little less than 30%, 10% more than that of

girls. Similarly, regarding Computer games, the number of boys enjoying them was

over 80%, much higher than girls.

The rest one which is preferred by girls, namely Art and Craft, belongs to

the third group. The data indicates that the proportion of girls reached nearly

60%, almost twice of that of boys.

In conclusion, the percentage between two genders varies a lot in different

kinds of leisure activities, and interestingly, all children like watching TVs

and Videos most.

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