2016年6月4日雅思考试写作大作文范文

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6月4日雅思大作文考得是教育类话题，这道题其实并不是很容易。看上去一点也不难写，但写拓展的时候并不是看上去那么简单...来看看范文吧!

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Task：

Many students are taught to push themselves and try hard to be better than

their classmates, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the

disadvantages of training students to be competitive outweigh the

advantages?

很多学生被教育要努力学习，要超过其他同学，而不是一起学习，共同受益。这种训练学生变得有好胜心的方式是否缺点大于优点?

Sample answer：

When it comes to the issue about whether giving students more training should

be promoted, some people argue that competitiveness achieved through training

could bring more advantages to students, but I cannot agree with this

opinion.

Admittedly, young students could gain more skills after taking part in more

courses and activities. It is common that parents are eager to send their

children to some extracurricular classes, such as language courses or artistic

courses. Through such courses, children may gain higher grades or obtain special

skills compared to peers. Then, they may be enrolled by better schools due to

their outstanding performances. However, such behavior of parents may bring more

detriments to their children.

Initially, selfishness may arise from a strong notion of competition. When

children are asked by parents to attend a lot of training, some children may

have a feeling that they are the focus of everybody. They are taught to exceed

others, which could be translated into another sentence, “they are taught to

gain more profits by defeating others”. Then, some students may only pay

attention to their own profits, which may not be suitable in the current society

where teamwork turns to be increasingly more crucial.

Furthermore, devoting so much time to some specific courses, students may

have insufficient time and energy to cultivate their own interests. Many courses

aimed at students’ competitiveness may not be so attractive, but parents will

still persuade their children to take those courses to be more competitive.

However, taking courses may leave students no room for their own hobbies.

Without personal hobbies, many students may just repeat their boring schedules

every day without happiness.

In sum, considering the selfishness acquired and the joy lost, disadvantages

of training students may overshadow its benefits.

(291 words)

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