雅思写作知识点分析(七十一)，小作文中妙用with!

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小小一个with，往往也能成为写作的制胜法宝。

本期，我们将通过《剑桥10》Test 2 小作文来看考官会怎么用with：

“附加变化”

Sweden and Denmark showed a different pattern, with falls in banana sales

from 1.8-1 and 2-0.9 million euros.

写法：with +趋势名词+数据

解析：

1. 句子主干部分先作概括性描述(总)：两国情况不一

2. 其后以with falls详细展开(分)，添上具体数值以凸显并证明主干：销售额减少的情况不同

3. 仿写：Sweden and Denmark showed a similar pattern, with an increase of 0.2

million euros in Fairtrade coffee sales.

“排除异己”

Comparing the two tables, it is clear that in 1999 Fairtrade coffee sales

ranged from 0.8-3 million euros in these five countries, while banana sales also

mostly clustered between 0.6 and 2 million euros, with Switzerland the outlier

at a huge 15 million euros.

写法：with + noun. the outlier + 数据

解析：

1. 本句很长，我们大致梳理句子内容为：1999年，咖啡销售额在0.8-3 million euros之间，而香蕉销售额基本集中在0.6-2

million euros之间。简言之，为数据划定一个范围。

2. 但有时，这组数据间会有“异军”突起，此时不妨用with短语来排除特殊项。

3. 本句还可以借鉴的地方在：在Switzerland后补上同位语名词“the outlier 异常值” 。

4. 仿写：In 1999, Fairtrade coffee sales mostly ranged between 1 and 6 million

euros, with the UK the outlier at a huge 20 million euros.

with的用法还有，我们下期再细数!