2018年4月14日雅思大作文真题范文:周边环境问题谁负责
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2018年4月14日场的雅思写作大作文话题为综合类话题,讨论政府是否应该让人们对自己当地的环境负责。在那些程度你是同意或者不同意?本话题由政府类及环境类话题结合,是比较常见的话题,对考鸭来说,应该不陌生。下面请看写作真题解析及高分范文。
雅思写作真题解析 本题讨论政府是否应该鼓励人们承担起保护他们自己当地观景的责任。题目类型是议论文的一种观点类题目, 题目问问法是To what
extent do you agree or disagree类型,可以采用5段式作文结构。
雅思写作文章结构
P1:引入话题+表明观点(部分否定观点)
P2:指出此做法的的优势:可以解决一些环境问题;
P3:指出此做法的弊端:不能从根本是解决所有环境问题。
P4:指出此做法的弊端:在现实生活中很难实施。
P5:总结:概括文章内容和重申观点。
雅思写作高分话题表达
Make strides 取得重大进步
Vulnerable 脆弱的
Preserve 保护
a low carbon lifestyle 低碳生活

Uninhabitable 不宜居住的
Conserve 保护
fundamentally 根本上地
Tricky 棘手的
Future concern 未来的担忧
defend 保护
雅思写作高分结构
Protecting and preserving 押头韵
Without.. , sth will hardly ... . 双重否定表达肯定
This is mainly because 这主要是因为
..., a problem that is so complex that it 重复性同位语
Workable as it seems 让步状语从句的倒装
... , especially when 尤其是当...
雅思写作大作文范文
While humans have made strides economically and technologically, the natural
environment has become increasingly vulnerable as people cut down trees, pollute
the air, water and soil. Therefore, encouraging them to assume the
responsibility for protecting and preserving their own environment locally seems
to be feasible but is unrealistic indeed.
If the government persuades its citizens to take care of their environment at
the local level, some environmental problems will then be solved. Only if every
individual in different areas choose to lead a low carbon lifestyle , for
example driving less but taking public transport more and using less disposable
products but reusing and recycling more, the air will be cleaner and resources
on which we thrive consumed less.But if all individuals just continue to damage
the environment and take no action to change, the environment in which they
reside and live will become a uninhabitable place. Without cooperation with
different groups at the local level, the environment will hardly be
improved.
But only pushing people to conserve the environment locally cannot address
all environmental problems fundamentally. For example, the energy crisis has
recently been a tricky problem for most countries, a problem that is so complex
that it is beyond an individual’s ability to deal with. This is mainly because
developing clean and renewable energy costs money and resources and because a
growing number of environmental problems are no longer confined to a certain
region or country.
Even worse, a majority of people are reluctant to adopt the solutions the
government has proposed. The major reason is that many people consider the

environment problem as a future concern. Some environment problems, such as
climate change,may need to be tackled even after a century. Time and money is
better invested in coping with immediate problems such as house shortage and
traffic jam than in preventing a disaster that is only expected to happen in the
future.
In conclusion, workable as it seems , inducing people to defend their own
local environment not only fails to be an effective solution but is difficult to
make this goal a reality in real life and in addition to individual efforts,
other measures are also necessary especially when the environment problems is
caused by a combination of factors, many of which are too big for an individual
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