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Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others

think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by

themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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第一段，简单的同义改写

When it comes to the issue of raising children, some people believe that

there is a need for parents to read stories to their children, but others

propose that children do not need parents since they can enjoy stories from

other sources.

第二段，读书有利于维持关系~

On one hand, sharing a story with children contributes to strengthening the

relationship between parents and children. When children grow up, a lot of them

may not get along well with their parents because there hardly exist

interactions between them. However, if parents are willing to tell stories to

their children closely since childhood, they can share happiness or sorrow

together when reading stories. Then, children may not feel so isolated from

their parents and the emotional tie can be maintained.

第三段，父母不太行是因为其他source更加有趣

On the other hand, children can have a better experience of enjoying stories

with other sources. For most parents, they just hold a book and read lines,

which sometimes makes children feel bored. However, other sources, such as TV

series and movies, provide children with both visual and audio information,

bringing more fun to children. Therefore, considering the joy acquired from

stories by other sources, children may not need parents to read books.

第四段，我自己的观点~

From my own perspective, these two opinions do not necessarily contradict

each other and they are actually complementary. Parents need to admit that only

reading books to children cannot meet their increasing demands in the current

era. Correspondingly, parents should try to make better use of other sources and

broaden children’s horizons by giving them more new stories. Meanwhile, it is

also crucial for parents to accompany children when children read books since

children may be too young to understand some hidden meanings of stories and

parents can explain stories to children clearly.