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In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more

freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the

advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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本文是一篇教育类和科技类结合的题目。近年来，话题之间的交叉和结合已经成为趋势，同学们要注意。题目中给出的是一种现象，由于互联网的出现，人们可以在家工作或上大学。题目问的是这种趋势的好处是否大于坏处。

参考范文：

In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more

freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the

advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, with the advance of technology, people have easy access to the

Internet, which makes working or studying at home realizable. From my point of

view, I believe the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits.

The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that

excessive exposure to computers is detrimental to people’s health. To be

specific, for many people, for example, students, they may spend their leisure

time playing computer games or watching TV and in this case, if they study at

home through the internet, sitting in front of the screen for hours, it may give

rise to a range of health problems like myopia and obesity.

However, there are more benefits. The most obvious advantage is saving time.

The traffic is becoming increasingly crowded these days and it costs working

people amounts of time on the road. If they can work at home, commuting will not

be a problem and people can use the time saved to develop their personal

interests, which can contribute to the well-being of individuals.

Apart from this, it is more flexible to work or study at home.

For students, instead of attending lectures and seminars at fixed time, they

can download them from the internet and watch them whenever they have time and

energy. For people in the workplace, they do not have to wear suits or high

heels all day; they can wear casual and comfortable clothes when working.

In conclusion, although people may suffer from some illnesses, this problem

can be remitted through some physical activities in the weekends and at the same

time, working or studying at home does boost efficiency and brings convenience

to both students and employees.

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高分词汇：

the widespread use of ………的广泛使用

outweigh比……重要;超过

the advance of technology科技的进步

realizable可实现的

the merits of ………的长处

demerit短处，缺点

excessive exposure to computers过度接触电脑

be detrimental to …对……有害

leisure time业余时间，闲暇时间

give rise to造成，引起

myopia and obesity近视和肥胖

commuting通勤

personal interests个人兴趣;个人利益

be remitted through …通过……使……缓和

bring convenience to …给……带来便利

From my point of view，…在我看来，……

The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that

…人们最先想到最迫切的担忧是……

To be specific，…具体来说，……

The most obvious advantage is …最明显的优点是……

Apart from this，…除此之外，……

it is more flexible to ………更灵活