考官雅思写作小作文满分范文 柱状图:学习动机

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相比较雅思大作文，网络上与市面上的小作文资料相对较少，质量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鸭，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要图表类范文的指导，所以，请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。柱状图：学习动机，共178词，band9.

话题：

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of

different groups and the amount of support they received from

employers.

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满分范文：

The

bar charts compare students of different ages in terms of why they are studying

and whether they are supported by an employer.

It is clear that the

proportion of students who study for career purposes is far higher among the

younger age groups, while the oldest students are more likely to study for

interest. Employer support is more commonly given to younger

students.

Around 80% of students aged under 26 study to further their

careers, whereas only 10% study purely out of interest. The gap between these

two proportions narrows as students get older, and the figures for those in

their forties are the same, at about 40%. Students aged over 49 overwhelmingly

study for interest (70%) rather than for professional reasons (less than

20%).

Just over 60% of students aged under 26 are supported by their

employers. By contrast, the 30-39 age group is the most self-sufficient, with

only 30% being given time off and help with fees. The figures rise slightly for

students in their forties and for those aged 50 or more.(178 words, band

9)