2016年3月31日最新雅思写作真题大作文范文

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3月31日的雅思写作大作文考了这样一个话题：Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports.现在小孩子花很多的时间玩电脑游戏，花在运动上的时间很少。命题者要求我们分析出现这种现象的原因，并要我们分析这样带来的是积极影响还是消极影响.一起来看关于这个话题的范文吧！

2016年3月31日雅思写作真题大作文范文汇总

Task：

Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little

time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

具体思路分析：

第一段描述现象引出话题，明确文章框架结构并表明观点，即孩子在电脑游戏上花太多时间，运动的时间较少是消极的发展趋势。

第二段陈述什么原因会导致该现象的发生，即为什么孩子们花更多的时间在打游戏上而不是做运动。

第三段与第四段陈述为什么该现象是一消极的发展趋势。

第五段总结全文。

Sample answer:

Nowadays, it is common that a large number of children incline to spend more

time on computer games than sports. Some people claim that it is acceptable and

understandable, however, from my perspective, spending enormous time on computer

games instead of sports is a negative development both for children’s growth and

harmonious society. Therefore, the essay aims to explore factors influencing

that unexpected phenomenon and reasons why it is a disadvantageous

development.

The reasons for such a craze, come as follows. Firstly, the prosperity of

Internet environment and prevalent advertisement campaign make it more

convenient for cyber addicts to get access to various sorts of online games. In

addition, the current students attach more importance to possess exciting

experiences rather than healthy lives in order to release their study pressure,

more often than not, it is computer games that meet their demands best.

Nevertheless, there seems to be some undesirable consequences under that

phenomenon. To begin with, excessive use of Internet has been undermining our

interpersonal relationship offline. Chances are that they are unconsciously leak

their personal information by communicating with online players. That is why

cyber fraud is becoming increasingly rampant there. What is worse, the addiction

to playing online games, over-regraded as the virtual environment, may lead to

impulsiveness and irrationality. Therefore, children are more likely to behave

unethically and even commit crimes, contributing to destroy social harmony.

Another perceived disadvantage is that it is detrimental for their healthy

growth. Unlike doing exercises, playing online games make kids form sedentary

lifestyles, causing obesity which would induce illness, like high blood pressure

and diabetes.

Consequently, spending substantial time on online game is a negative

development both for the society and children’s growth. Kids are supposed to be

encouraged to do more exercise to keep fit in the long run.

(300 words)

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