【考题来啦】2016年1月雅思写作考试真题解析及高分范文汇总

2024-04-26

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【考题来啦】2016年1月雅思写作考试真题解析及高分范文汇总

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2016年1月9日雅思写作题目:【教育类+政府类】,具体题目如下:

Most government money should be invested inteaching science rather than any

other subjects inorder for a country to develop and

progress?大多数政府的财政应该投资于理科教育这样,而不是其他科目,这样国家才能发展和进步,是否认同?

【范文赏析】:

Knowledge is power, Francis bacon wrote long ago. Education has a key to play

in one’sgrowth and a nation’s development.

Education is the driving force of productivity. Keeping this in mind,

numerous countriesand governments are paying closer attention to the cultivation

of talents. People differ greatlyin their views as to how to wisely allocate

educational budget, some people assert thatinstead of supporting other subjects,

national investment in science is desirable. As I see it,government should place

equal stress on both science and arts.

Granted, plenty of evidence and arguments could be easily found to prove that

it isadvisable for a nation to subsidize science. For a start, the competition

among differentcountries, to some extent, amounts to the competition of gifted

people. Science andtechnology is the stimulating factor of the development of

productivity. Large amounts oftalents could inject new life into a nation’s

【考题来啦】2016年1月雅思写作考试真题解析及高分范文汇总

prosperity. Besides, in comparison with artstudents, those who are better

equipped with science knowledge such as computer, businessand accounting could

create more commercial value.

Nevertheless, it is rather superficial to simply say that national budget

should be onlyrestricted to science investment. The mightiness of a nation

involves many aspects and thecultivation of good citizens or talents is to

realize one’s comprehensive development. Theconstruction of a country needs

enterprisers, mathematicians and scientist, yet, on no accountcan we ignore the

immense value of artists, writers, musicians. In addition to sciencesubjects,

literature, history, philosophy, music, art and PE should also become the aim

ofeducation. Literature strengthens one’s cultural deposit, history deepens

one’s insight into life,philosophy fosters one’s analytical thinking, music

moulds one’s temperament, art cultivatesone’s artistic eye and PE enhances one’s

health index. In these senses, art still deservesenough attachment and support.

Art talents are indispensable to the betterment of acountry.

Overall, I re-affirm my conviction that education should not have too much

utilitarian,conversely, it needs to render more concerns over one’s spiritual

growth and character-training. Ideal educational policy should place equal

significance on science investment andother subjects. (350)

2016年1月14日雅思写作大作文考的是一个和犯罪有关的话题,题目如下:

A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy seriously destroyed

school got apunishment to clean streets instead of sending toprison. Do you

think young criminals should be sentto jail?

报道显示:14岁的年轻人校园违规后会受到做清洁工作的处罚而非服刑,你认为少年犯是否应该被送进监狱?(2016年1月14日)

【范文赏析】:

Alarmingly, various misdeeds among teenagersranging from school bullying or

sex assault are nowbecoming big headaches in many countries. Juveniledelinquency

not only afflicts the victims but alsojeopardizes the community. Many efforts

havealready been made on how to crack down juvenilecrime, but, the effect is far

from satisfying. Thisessay aims to represent relevant measures ofpenalties.

Nobody is innate perpetrator,during the journey of life,those who are in the

formativeyears are,sometimes,derailed by manifold causes such as the negative

influence of negativemass media, the disadvantaged family background or external

factors. In this sense, stricterpenalty for the first offenders, unintentional

lawbreakers is far from rational, especially whentaking the teenagers’ immature

mentality into account. Virtually, appropriate punishment iscommendable, to

motivate those juvenile offenders to serve the community or sweeping thestreet

can be reasonable measures.

Notwithstanding all that,taking the effects of a misconduct and its

motivation intoconsideration is a prerequisite for ensuring justice of the law.

There should not be fixedpunishment for all youth crime. Some misdeeds, for

example, school bullying or sex assaultswill inevitably distress the sufferers

and endanger the society. Hence, light penalty forfelony is unwise. Conversely,

stricter punishment for hardened criminals will not only embodythe justice of

law but also exert a deterrent effect on those potential malefactors.

To sum up,there is no simple resolution for such a complicate social

problem,it isreasonable to expect that the combination of these suggestions may

be needed. Custom-tailored penalty may be the best strategy for each teenage

crime.

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