【考题来啦】2016年1月雅思写作考试真题解析及高分范文汇总
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2016年1月9日雅思写作题目:【教育类+政府类】,具体题目如下:
Most government money should be invested inteaching science rather than any
other subjects inorder for a country to develop and
progress?大多数政府的财政应该投资于理科教育这样,而不是其他科目,这样国家才能发展和进步,是否认同?
【范文赏析】:
Knowledge is power, Francis bacon wrote long ago. Education has a key to play
in one’sgrowth and a nation’s development.
Education is the driving force of productivity. Keeping this in mind,
numerous countriesand governments are paying closer attention to the cultivation
of talents. People differ greatlyin their views as to how to wisely allocate
educational budget, some people assert thatinstead of supporting other subjects,
national investment in science is desirable. As I see it,government should place
equal stress on both science and arts.
Granted, plenty of evidence and arguments could be easily found to prove that
it isadvisable for a nation to subsidize science. For a start, the competition
among differentcountries, to some extent, amounts to the competition of gifted
people. Science andtechnology is the stimulating factor of the development of
productivity. Large amounts oftalents could inject new life into a nation’s

prosperity. Besides, in comparison with artstudents, those who are better
equipped with science knowledge such as computer, businessand accounting could
create more commercial value.
Nevertheless, it is rather superficial to simply say that national budget
should be onlyrestricted to science investment. The mightiness of a nation
involves many aspects and thecultivation of good citizens or talents is to
realize one’s comprehensive development. Theconstruction of a country needs
enterprisers, mathematicians and scientist, yet, on no accountcan we ignore the
immense value of artists, writers, musicians. In addition to sciencesubjects,
literature, history, philosophy, music, art and PE should also become the aim
ofeducation. Literature strengthens one’s cultural deposit, history deepens
one’s insight into life,philosophy fosters one’s analytical thinking, music
moulds one’s temperament, art cultivatesone’s artistic eye and PE enhances one’s
health index. In these senses, art still deservesenough attachment and support.
Art talents are indispensable to the betterment of acountry.
Overall, I re-affirm my conviction that education should not have too much
utilitarian,conversely, it needs to render more concerns over one’s spiritual
growth and character-training. Ideal educational policy should place equal
significance on science investment andother subjects. (350)
2016年1月14日雅思写作大作文考的是一个和犯罪有关的话题,题目如下:
A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy seriously destroyed
school got apunishment to clean streets instead of sending toprison. Do you
think young criminals should be sentto jail?
报道显示:14岁的年轻人校园违规后会受到做清洁工作的处罚而非服刑,你认为少年犯是否应该被送进监狱?(2016年1月14日)
【范文赏析】:
Alarmingly, various misdeeds among teenagersranging from school bullying or
sex assault are nowbecoming big headaches in many countries. Juveniledelinquency
not only afflicts the victims but alsojeopardizes the community. Many efforts
havealready been made on how to crack down juvenilecrime, but, the effect is far
from satisfying. Thisessay aims to represent relevant measures ofpenalties.
Nobody is innate perpetrator,during the journey of life,those who are in the
formativeyears are,sometimes,derailed by manifold causes such as the negative
influence of negativemass media, the disadvantaged family background or external
factors. In this sense, stricterpenalty for the first offenders, unintentional
lawbreakers is far from rational, especially whentaking the teenagers’ immature
mentality into account. Virtually, appropriate punishment iscommendable, to
motivate those juvenile offenders to serve the community or sweeping thestreet
can be reasonable measures.
Notwithstanding all that,taking the effects of a misconduct and its
motivation intoconsideration is a prerequisite for ensuring justice of the law.
There should not be fixedpunishment for all youth crime. Some misdeeds, for
example, school bullying or sex assaultswill inevitably distress the sufferers
and endanger the society. Hence, light penalty forfelony is unwise. Conversely,
stricter punishment for hardened criminals will not only embodythe justice of
law but also exert a deterrent effect on those potential malefactors.
To sum up,there is no simple resolution for such a complicate social
problem,it isreasonable to expect that the combination of these suggestions may
be needed. Custom-tailored penalty may be the best strategy for each teenage
crime.
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