9分考官级雅思大作文范文之我们应该只关心自己的国家吗

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本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we

should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent

do you agree or disagree with this

statement?我们无法帮助所有的人，所以我们应该只专注于自己的社区和国家。同意与否?精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

考官级范文库：6大题型36篇9分雅思写作范文汇总分享

范文：

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long

as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I

believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and

fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or

disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example,

in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this

problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to

support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from

donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on

our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some

people feel that we should prioritise local charity.

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live

beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are

much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier

to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African

countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply

by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international

charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion

national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.

(280 words, band 9)