9分考官级雅思大作文范文之企业社会责任

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本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是As well as making money, businesses also have social

responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?除了赚钱，企业还有相应的社会责任，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

考官级范文库：6大题型36篇9分雅思写作范文汇总分享

范文：

Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming

increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that

companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more

for society than simply make money.

On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive

in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should

be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for

buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in

improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is

unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns

about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can

only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial

health.

On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of

maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social

obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well,

rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to

ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that

businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities,

environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to

minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that

company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax

system.

In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on

their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.

(285 words, band 9)