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范文及解析

信息分组：两个时间点之间有比较关系，同一个时间点上五个之间也有比较关系。

咖啡：2004年比1999年销售额高：all of the five countries

香蕉：2004年比1999年销售额高：Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium

2004年比1999年销售额低：the other two countries;然后，写作内容的顺序就根据信息分组来。

Introduction 略

咖啡：

先总写格局/趋势(不带数值)→ In all of the five countries, there was increased sales of

coffee in 2004 compared with the year of 1999. 然后，写突出的具体数值→The tremendous growth

in the UK is obviously noteworthy, 大家的写作习惯是用定语从句介绍数值，其实可以用状语从句引出数据之间的关系作为语法亮点→

as the 20 million euros in 2004 is roughly 18 times of 1999's sales. The 6

million euros in Switzerland, twice of the 1999 sales, ← 这里是定语引出数据之间的关系 is

alsonotable, and the growth of various degrees in the other countries is far

lessmarked.

*进一步点：Selling coffee became a markedly larger business,

←不是简单的描述数据本身，而是描述了数据所体现出来的现实情况，而后面的数据(由状语从句引出)来支撑这个描述→ as the sales saw a surge

to 20 million euros in 2004 compared with the year of 1999. Switzerland

witnessed the same case, ←不是简单的描述数据本身，而是描述了数据所体现出来的现实情况，而后面的数据(由状语成分引出)来支撑这个描述→

with a two-fold growth (from 3 million to 6 million).

香蕉：

先总写格局/趋势(不带数值)→ Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium witnessedincreased sales

of bananas, whereas the other two countries saw a decrease.然后，写突出的具体数值→ The

seven-fold increase in Belgium is considerable, although its numerical value is

small, and, meanwhile, Switzerland's 32-million-euro-increment was also

remarkable. In the other two countries where the sales decreased, the figures

dropped by half.

注意全文中句子主语(方框斜体)的多样。

Conclusion 略