雅思写作Task1小作文柱状图范文--7个国家出生时的预期寿命
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Task:Life expectancy at birth in 7 countries worldwide.
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思路解析:
1. 分段原则为: 按照数据的大小对比分一段,女性比男性多分一段。
2. 注意描述一类数据(Max, Min, Avg)。
3. 类比模式下,应该重点描述数据的差异,可通过减法和除法进行比较。eg.在美国,男女之间的寿命差异最大,为5年。
参考范文:
This bar chart compares how long people can expect to live in seven different
countries.
We can see that in each of the seven countries people have a life expectancy
of between63 years and 83 years. People will live longest in Canada at 83 years
and the United States (81 years), while Bangladesh has the lowest life
expectancy at just 63 years. Of the other countries, Turkey, Vietnam, Iran and
India all have a similar level close to the average of 73 years.
We should also note that women are expected to live longer than men in all
these countries. On average, females will live approximately 4 years longer than
men, although there are differences here. The greatest difference is in the
United States (about 5 years),while in Iran females are expected to live only 2
years longer than men. However, the major exception is Bangladesh where both

genders have the same life expectancy.

Thus, we can see there are comparisons to be made in life expectancy both in
geographical location and gender.
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