2017年12月2日雅思写作大作文原创范文

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带来2017年12月2日雅思写作真题大作文范文，题目是：Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing

old buildings. Some people think money should be spent on building new modern

buildings.To what extent do you agree or disagree with these

views.本题讨论因为花在保护老建筑物的钱太多，所以钱应该花在新建现代建筑物上。其实本题的本质是在变相考察不保护老建筑物的弊端和建筑现在建筑物的优势。

1.范文解析：题目类型是议论文的一种观点类是To what extant do you agree or

disagree类型，可以采用双边讨论，也就是5段式作文。特别需要注意的是，题目中让讨论的不是:是否应该保护古老历史建筑物，而是some people

think(观点句)之后的是否应该资助现代建筑物的建筑。注意不要偏题哦。

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2.原创范文

Buildings, whether they are old or modern, is more than just a place where

human beings could escape from bad weather. Therefore, financial aid should

never only be provided to the construction of modern buildings.

Just catering to the growth of urban sprawl is exactly what empowers the

investment in modern buildings to be worthwhile. As an ever increasing number of

people flood into cities for a better quality of life, both skyscrapers and

high-rise buildings could accommodate the growing population, an effective and

efficient solution to housing shortage in cities. With the infrastructure

improving at the same time, this will also attract more investors and create and

enhance way more job opportunities, thus energizing and bolstering the urban

economy. In this case, financing the protection and preservation of old

buildings is less preferable than that of modern ones.

However, such commitment to sponsor new buildings turns out to be in fact far

more pricey. This is principally because when constructing a brand new building,

building materials such as bricks, glass, steal , wood and so on are required

and even worse more building wastes that are usually toxic are then have to be

headed to the landfill. In addition to these material cost, the burden it

imposes on resource scarcity and pollution could be prohibitively expensive, and

in other words, never could these problems be resolved by money alone. By stark

contrast, conserving traditional buildings consumes less and thereby proves to

be both economical and environmental friendly.

Compared with conventional buildings, modern, high-tech buildings are also a

financial failure in a sense. They do not enjoy as much special aesthetic value

and historic significance as old ones do and what is worse is that they are so

similar around the world that fewer visitors are willing to come and that fewer

investors to establish new business. Old buildings, as a cultural heritage on

the other hand, could attract millions of people and bring countless dollars and

jobs for the locals. Therefore, maintaining them is not a money waster but

rather a money-maker.

In conclusion, conducive as it is to urbanization, the creation of new

buildings is not as inexpensive as the conservation of old ones and maybe the

coexistence of both is by far the best, ideal result.(339 words)原创来自易伯华邢睿赢老师

3.文章结构

P1：引入话题+表明观点(不同意)

P2：承认现代建筑物的优势：可以缓解房屋短缺和吸引投资来论证

P3：指出其弊端之后：现代建筑物会恶化资源短缺和环境污染来论证

P4：进一步指出：新建筑物不能像老建筑物那样促进旅游业的发展来论证

P5:总结(总结分论点+重申观点)

4.高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注) More than 不仅仅是

Escape from 拜托;免受...之苦

Urban sprawl 城市扩张

Empower ...to do sth 使能够(enable的同义词)

Worthwhile 值得做的。。。

,an effective and efficient solution to sth 一个高效的的解决办法

Flood into 大量涌入

With infrastructure improving 随着基础设施的完成(独立主格结构)

Energizing and bolstering 加强

urban economy 城市经济

Preferable 更合适的

Prohibitively expensive 价格高的离谱

Financial failure 财务上的失败

Money-maker 赚钱的生意;摇钱树

Conducive 有益的

5.高分结构

Whether they are old or modern 不管是旧的还是新的

what empowers sth to be worthwhile 使得某事值得做

An effective and efficient solution to 概括性同位语

With infrastructure improving 独立主格结构

This is principally because 这主要是因为...

Never could these problems be resolved by money alone. 不能只依靠钱来解决。 倒装结构。

What is worse is that 更糟糕的是。。(主语从句)

Conducive as it is 尽管是有益的。。(状语从句的倒装)

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