考官教你一道雅思写作题的3种立论方法
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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology
develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent
do you agree or disagree with this view?
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对于雅思写作中的这种to what extent do you agree or disagree题型我们常常有3种立场
There are basically three ways to answer this question: you can agree,
disagree or partly agree. So here are three possible introductions:
请看考官的三种开头段写法:
1. Agree同意
It is true that technology is developing at an incredible rate, and that
traditional societies and cultural practices are disappearing as a result. I
therefore agree with the view that technology and traditional cultures cannot
coexist.
2. Disagree反对
Some people would argue that technological developments lead to the
disappearance of traditional societies and cultural practices. I completely
disagree with this view because I see no reason why technology cannot coexist
with traditional cultures and even enhance them.
3. Partly agree / balanced opinion部分同意/中庸立场
Some people believe that technological developments lead to the disappearance
of traditional cultures. While this may be true in the case of some societies or
customs, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.
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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology
develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent
do you agree or disagree with this view?
Some people believe that technological developments lead to the loss of
traditional cultures. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true
in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected by technology and
the modern world.
On the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven
industrialisation in developed countries have certainly contributed to the
disappearance of traditional ways of life. For example, in pre-industrial
Britain, generations of families grew up in the same small village communities.
These communities had a strong sense of identity, due to their shared customs
and beliefs. However, developments in transport, communications and
manufacturing led to the dispersal of families and village communities as people
moved to the cities in search of work. Nowadays most British villages are
inhabited by commuters, many of whom do not know their closest neighbours.
On the other hand, in some parts of the world traditional cultures still
thrive. There are tribes in the Amazon Rainforest, for example, that have been
completely untouched by the technological developments of the developed world.
These tribal communities continue to hunt and gather food from the forest, and
traditional skills are passed on to children by parents and elders. Other
traditional cultures, such as farming communities in parts of Africa, are
embracing communications technologies. Mobile phones give farmers access to
information, from weather predictions to market prices, which helps them to
prosper and therefore supports their culture.
In conclusion, many traditional ways of life have been lost as a result of
advances in technology, but other traditional communities have survived and even
flourished.
(266 words, band 9)
Here are the "band 7 to 9" phrases from Wednesday's essay. See if you can
write a full sentence with each of these phrases.
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technological developments
lead to the loss of
this assertion
it may be true in the case of
seem to be unaffected by
advances in technology that have driven industrialisation
contributed to the disappearance of

in pre-industrial Britain
generations of families grew up in small communities
a strong sense of identity
shared customs and beliefs
led to the dispersal of families
villages are inhabited by commuters
traditional cultures still thrive
have been completely untouched by
hunt and gather food
traditional skills are passed on to children by parents and elders
are embracing communications technologies
access to information
from weather predictions to market prices
helps them to prosper
have survived and even flourished
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