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雅思写作话题：In recent years pressure on school and university students has been

increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age.Do you think

this is a positive or negative development? 近年来学生身上的压力越发大，他们必须从小就刻苦努力。好与坏?

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Some people believe that students need to work diligently from an early age

since they face increasing more pressure at high school and university. However,

I cannot agree with this opinion.

第二段，承认一下早学的好处~

Admittedly, studying harder can make students become more competitive when

they receive higher education. It is acknowledged that knowledge one learns at

high school and university is more difficult than that of primary and secondary

school. If students can learn more knowledge earlier, when they go to high

school and university, they probably find that some courses are quite easy for

them since they learn some knowledge in advance. However, admitting merits

brought by studying harder is not assuming that young students must spend more

time on it.

第三段，让学生太早注重学习容易带来反效果

To begin with, students may lose their interest in study if they are forced

to study from an early age. For most primary and secondary students, it may be

difficult for them to understand the reason why they need to work hard; in other

words, they probably lack motivation for study. Providing that schools or

parents demand them to concentrate on courses, taking classes will become a

boring task for them. Then, it is more likely that students will dislike study,

but not focus on it.

第四段，没时间发展自己的兴趣了

In addition, spending too time on study, students will have insufficient time

to develop their own hobbies. In the current era, receiving higher education is

not the only option for students and many of them can make a living through

their personal interests. For example, some students show their talents in

taking photos or playing electronic games and there are a lot of photographers

and players who live a comfortable life. If students are asked to spend more

time on study, their talents in other fields may be neglected.

第五段，做一个小小总结~

To sum up, there is no need for students to study harder when they are young,

considering that they do not have time for developing their own interests and

some of them even dislike study.