2018年3月3日雅思写作真题大作文范文及范文解析（易伯华原创版）

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2018年3月3日场的雅思考试已经结束，为大家带来本场雅思大作文写作真题范文。本场雅思写作大作文有关犯罪类话题，题目为：In most countries, prison is the most common solution for the problem of

crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better

education so that they do not become criminals.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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雅思写作大作文范文解析：犯罪类题目出现频率不高，但是难度较大。但是本篇围绕解决犯罪问题是把罪犯送到监狱服刑还是给人们提供更好教育避免他们犯法。范文倾向于同意后者并给出论点。全文共计13句话。

雅思写作大作文范文

It has become an international norm to send criminals into prison in order to

deal with the rising crime rate which appears to become an increasingly

concerning issue in contemporary society. However, others claim that education

might be a better means to prevent people from degenerating into law violators

and I personally agree almost entirely with this statement.

There is no denying that prison serves as a deterring approach for potential

offenders and can help to rehabilitate them. Many inmates have the opportunity

to study while they are doing time, contributing to the fact that many never

re-offend when they are released.

However, life in jail is far too comfortable for prisoners especially for

those homeless or unemployed. For example, many inmates have access to not only

the bare necessities of life but also luxuries such as televisions, computers

and sports facilities and so on. In other words, spending time behind the bar is

more like being in a holiday camp. There is considerable evidence suggesting

that in Japan, seniors aged over 70 years old would deliberately steal something

in a supermarket in order to go to jail where they can be sheltered from poverty

and loneliness.

Another drawback of serving a sentence is that a large number of prisoners

are not actually a danger to society, exemplified by shoplifters who are often

locked up in the same cells as murders, rapists and violent criminals, thus in

such a circumstance, bullying might occur among culprits. What is worse is that

petty criminals may even learn how to commit more serious crimes when they are

inside. By contrast, education plays a more significant role in that many people

perpetrated crimes because they had little knowledge about the law and lacked

basic survival skills. Therefore, what is more urgent for them is to enhance

their legal awareness and practical skills such as driving, cooking and

repairing machines.

In conclusion, although it is a common belief that prison is the best way to

punish criminals, I believe it is not appropriate for everyone and it is not

necessary in the majority of cases. Personally, of crucial importance is

teaching them about survival skills and law-abiding consciousness, which can be

achieved by education.（字数 369 words）

范文原创自易伯华老师Alice.Hua

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