9分考官级雅思大作文范文之青少年是否应该无偿为社区工作

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本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Some people think that all teenagers should be required to

do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this

would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree

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范文：

Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial

for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we

should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies,

without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time.

School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their

students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day.

When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it

with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities.

They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from

obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes

against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do

something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst

young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would

not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to

volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in

my opinion we should not make this compulsory.

(250 words, band 9)