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Task：Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are

the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?

Sample answer：

Security is always a frequently talked topic in the modern society. Looking

into the factors leading to dangers helps people to protect themselves from

insecurity. This essay will mainly analyze the reasons for this problem and

provide some solutions.

There are two main factors contributing to the phenomenon that more people

feel insecure. In general, the detailed description of violence on the mass

media should be responsible for this problem. When criminal cases such as

shooting, theft and driving after drinking are often reported on the TV, the

viewers’ safety and security will probably be threatened and they will be in the

belief that they are likely to subject to offenses at anytime. This problem can

also be attributed to the widespread use of mobile devices. With more

applications installed in people’s smart phones, they save too many secrets on

this device--the online bank passwords and the information of their social

network which may include significant business opportunities. It is not

exaggerated that their lives and property will be threatened if they lose their

precious mobile devices.

To solve this problem, governments, police stations and citizens themselves

should cooperate with each other. First of all, the government should impose a

restriction on the representation of crimes, reducing the plots focusing on the

detailed description. The governments and police stations needs to set up a

security system, through which citizens’ personal information can be prevented

from being stolen. It is also of great essence that citizens should raise the

awareness of security.

As mentioned above, the occurrence of crime on the mass media and the storage

of personal information on mobile devices are the main reasons for insecurity.

Governments, police stations and citizens should make a concerted effort to

address this issue.

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