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2021年4月3雅思大作文题目

More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to

get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive

or negative development?

范文及解析

01、With news online dispersing like wildfire [独立主格作状语], the heyday of the

newspaper industry and television news programs has gone. I tend to think this

trend irresistible and positive [表态].This [逻辑衔接]is partly because the Internet —

a vast storehouse of digital information — is convenient for people to dig for

previous news, whereas [对比] neither the printed paper material nor the TV

programs are easy to preserve for information searching.

解析

Ø在段表态(positive)

Ø并点出点积极之处(信息量大，方便读者搜索以往新闻)

02、The mass quantity of news online[逻辑衔接] also benefits from its fast

update speed. This [逻辑衔接] edge allows netizens to obtain any story from the blog

of a witness the second it happens, which is remarkable and more importantly,

life-saving when disasters happen. Newspapers and TV programs on the other hand

[逻辑衔接] need time for editing, censoring, printing, and delivering, extending

people’s access to news about the world to at least the next day.

解析

Ø 第二段继续点出积极之处(更新速度快，读者能迅速获取新闻)

03、Despite these [逻辑衔接], news online is still portable, with palm-sized

technological gadgets only. Typically, for people in a hurry in the morning,

convenience and mobility are always preferred, and this is why [逻辑衔接] they would

like to browse breaking news from a handhold phone on the subway rather than

spend minutes in front of the TV or carry a thick stack of paper materials

out.

解析

Ø 乘胜追击，再点积极之处(便携)

04、However[逻辑衔接], the demerits of accessing e-news cannot be denied. To get

more traffic, some news editors no longer interview in person but fabricate,

releasing inauthentic news online. Consuming such information [逻辑衔接], the public

is hard not to be misled.

解析

Ø转而写一点消极之处(鱼龙混杂，易被误导)

05、In conclusion, I think the growth of online newspaper is positive. The main

point is that government should superintend the released information and news

writers should have a fact-finding attitude.

解析

Ø 最后一段不仅是总结上文，还给出了在此基础上的一些合理建议。