2018年雅思写作大作文范文：竞争还是合作

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考鸭们都知道，雅思写作话题有一个历史题库。本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文：Many students are taught to push

themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together

for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the

disadvantages?(许多学生被教导要努力学习，比其他学生更好，而不是为每个人的利益一起工作。利大于弊吗?)2016年6月4日教育类雅思写作真题

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分析：文章结构类似AD类，首段提出个人观点，本文观点弊大于利。主体段讨论其利弊时，可从解决问题独立性与压力健康等问题思考，进行展开。最后一段重申观点，总结全文。

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我们生活在一个充斥着激烈竞争的世界，无论是企业还是个人，甚至是那些在学校学习的人都是如此。就我个人而言，我认为优点并不一定超过缺点。

It is common that we are living in a world filled with sever competition in

both businesses and individuals, even in those who study at schools. Personally,

I think the merits do not necessarily outweigh the demerits.

There are two benefits of developing students’ habit of competing with each

other. Firstly, establishing a competitive environment is able to enormously

motivate students of all levels to keep learning and working hard in order to

keep up with peers and achieve more goals. In other words, this prevents

ordinary students from giving up on themselves and makes them realize that being

competitive is a quality that is capable of building up their perseverance.

Furthermore, it is undeniable that competitive awareness can cultivate students

to improve their problem-solving skills through coping with continuous

challenges alone. Specifically, they are more likely to make great attempts to

figure out problems in more effective ways rather than wait for others to find

solutions.

When it comes to drawbacks, we cannot ignore the fact that cooperation plays

an extremely imperative role in students’ whole life. Those who do not know how

to cooperate may find it difficult to adapt to working environment in the

future, for one-man team is less appreciated in a large number of firms. Another

perceived disadvantage is that enormous competition has the possibility for

students to accumulate more pressure, especially for those who are not good at

dealing with stress, contributing to insomnia or other health issues. Therefore,

it can negatively affect their learning attitudes.

In conclusion, although encouraging students to be competitive is beneficial

for their academic studies and surrounding adaptability, it could become

demerits when teachers only emphasize on teaching competition and ignore the

impact of cooperation.

总之，虽然鼓励学生竞争是有益于他们的学术研究和周围的适应性，但它可能成为缺点时，教师只注重教学竞争，忽略合作的影响。

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