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Task:Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of

crimes. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime,

but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own

opinion.

Sample answer：

With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts

all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime,

there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot

fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for

which people can surrender to violence.

Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislation can

effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the

mature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing

crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition,

providing more education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and

consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails information about laws and

legislation are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are

given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a

completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living

standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely

believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the

possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of

society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for

governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol

are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to

get these items.

To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering

educations are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still

not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental

needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

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