【易伯华出品】9月10日雅思G类考试小作文范文

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Task：Recently you read a book about a place. Some information about the place

is incorrect.

You need to write:

Why/how do you know this place?

What is the incorrect information?

Why it is important to correct the wrong information?

参考范文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to tell you that the book published by Shanghai Foreign Language

Education Press has a problem. The name of the book is Theme Park written by Ken

Beatty. In Page 27, there is a headline “Five themed lands”, followed by the

paragraph that introduces five Disney lands respectively.

But in fact there are altogether six Disney Lands nowadays because in 2006

Shanghai has established and opened a new Disney park which I have just paid a

visit last month. I know the new park through local news and word of mouth. Both

broadcasters and my friends think highly of it.

To correct the figure from five to six Disney Lands is of significance

because it will attract more tourists from home and abroad to my hometown,

Shanghai. Therefore, our economy will be much stronger and culture will be much

more diversified and Shanghai will enjoy a better development.

Yours Sincerely,

Yolanda.

(156 words)