11月28雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 极限运动应该被禁止吗?

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2020年11月28日 雅思大作文题目

Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should

be banned.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

范文及解析

01、The more enthusiasts partake in extreme sports, the more dangers are

mentioned. But the truth is that the dangers of such activities are manageable,

so why ban them at all?

解析

1. 背景信息的铺垫要简洁且扣题;

2. 立场清晰简明：危险是可控的，又何来禁止一说?

3. 特别需要注意因果关系：以原因接上句作本句主干。

02、What is acceptable risk for these partakers may be unacceptable for

others.To those who fear, extreme sports are more prone to injure people than

other common sports, as they place extreme demands on strength, stamina and

adaptability to the perilous environment. High-altitude challenges – skydiving

and bungee jumping, for example, drastically increase the risk of heart attack,

and others like rock-climbing may cause head injuries or even fatal

falls.Inherently dangerous as these activities seem, they have always been

safety-conscious. With participants undergoing rigorous training and assessment

and with professionals accompanying, the danger coefficient has been reduced to

extremely low.

解析

1. 本段质疑对极限运动危险系数高这一观点;

2. 论证：为了丰富论证，通过举例具体化这些活动的危险性;

3. 论证：同时，驳倒这一危险说;

4. 措辞：本段主要结合使用了各类形式的从句、让步倒装结构、独立主格。

03、With this in mind, people should objectively treat extreme sports, not

hastily take out aninjunction against it. As a matter of fact, these events, in

the form of adventure, free thrill-seekers from traditional stadiums and lead

them to head out into the wilderness, where human potential could be evoked and

human limits challenged. The excitement and exhilaration generated from this is

unparalleled in other sports and can be a great stress reliever. From an

ability-development point of view, many extreme moves, such as diving and

scrambling, require millions of exercises. This, frustration education, builds

trainees’ independence and perseverance. There seems to be no strong reason,

then, to ban participants from getting involved.

解析

1. 本段回应题干继续回应是否应该禁止极限运动这一问题;

2. 论证：以说理的形式，罗列出其对参与者感官及能力上的影响;

3. 措辞：除了插入语的频繁使用外，本段还用了押首韵的修辞手法。

04、In conclusion, the world’s hunger for extreme sports cannot be curbed.

Therefore, as long as the thrill-seekers understand the underlying risks and are

capable of managing them, I would say they could try whatever extreme sports

they like.

解析

1. 结论概述上文即可;

2. 可以适当添加一些期待，如希望参与者理解且有能力管控风险。