【8大关注点】雅思小作文的必备信息核查表

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对雅思考生来说，作文写完没有人能批改，从而无法实现更好更快地提高，可以说是很多人雅思备考时的一个痛，下面易伯华雅思频道为大家分享一名雅思考官建议的雅思小作文修改列表，备考雅思的同学对着这个列表修改小作文，再也不用四处求人了。

In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information from

the diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is to

decide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process.

One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw the

chart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do and

so to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and a

practice suggestion.

雅思小作文最难的地方就在于确定哪些信息是最核心的。而一种思路就是你可以问问你自己如果让别人对照着你的作文里提供的信息能否画出原图表。不过即使是这样思考也不容易，所以我会为你提供8点核查项来帮助你。

雅思作文检查列表 Checklist

Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. I

suggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”to

all the questions.

1. Type of diagram 图表类型

Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/pie

chart/flow chart/table?

有没有说清楚这个一个什么样的图表----柱状图?线图?饼图?还是流程图?

2. The correct tense 时态

Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to past

time, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not just

using the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.

有没有运用正确的时态呢?要记住，不止要用对时态，还要再小作文中写清具体的时间!

3. The subjects 对象

Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram? Even

if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example, you

still need to refer to them all in your report.

所有图表中所提到的对象都写进小作文了吗?如果图表里提到8个国家，全部都要写进去哦~

4. Units

Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time

(months/years etc), money (millions of £) or simple numbers (10,000s). To do

this, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.

单位写清楚了吗?X轴和Y轴上的单位都要看清楚哦~

5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest

Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all charts and

graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame for

understanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may not

include every extreme so you need to use your judgement.

文中有重要信息点了吗?最高点、最低点、起点、终点、最多的、最少的一定要写进去!

6. Patterns and trends 模式和趋势

Have you noted any patterns?

In dynamic charts (when there is a change in time), it is nearly always

important to note whether the general trend is upwards or downwards.

在一个有变化的图表里，整体趋势如何，上升?下降?要写清~

In static charts (when there is only one time frame), it can be important to

note patterns. For example, if you look at my sample report on holiday

destinations, you will see that I group England, Scotland and Wales together and

note that they have a similar pattern.

7. Exceptions

Is there anything in the chart that is completely different to the general

pattern? If so, this too is very likely to be a key detail that needs to be

noted.

除了常规方式外的东西也要写到，就是图表中的“例外”。

8. Ordering information排序

Have you ordered the information in a logical way? It is no good putting all

the right information in if the keys points are hidden away. This can happen if

you follow the order of the chart without thinking. Possible logical ways of

ordering the report include:

从图表中选择的信息，又按照合理的逻辑排列好顺序吗?常见的逻辑顺序有：

start with the most significant detail 从最重要的细节开始说起

start with the general pattern, then note exceptions 从一般模式说起，然后注明有例外

group items that are similar 写一组里面有相似性的东西

move from the largest to the smallest 从最大值写到最小值

move from the first in time to the last in time 从时间起点写到时间终点

以上即是易伯华小编为大家编译的雅思考官对于雅思小作文的一个信息汇总表，希望能对小作文的复习有所帮助。