【9分作文盛宴】考官华丽雅思小作文详解15：表格题

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今天来看一篇小作文---Table。题目如下：

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in

five different countries in 2002.

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

之前我们在讲大作文的时候，有跟大家讲过，Simon看到作文题目的时候，他的思考过程是什么样的。

Today I'm going to explain my thinking process when I answer an IELTS Writing

Task 1 question. We'll use this question (Cambridge IELTS 7, page 30).This is

what I'm thinking(今天就来讲一下写小作文之前的思考过程，以上面的一道题目为例)：

1. I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing the

question.(我知道我能通过复述题目写出一个简短的introduction)

2. I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobacco

category has the highest percentages, and leisure/education has the

lowest.(我找寻整体趋势，能看出food/drinks/tobacco类别占最高比例，leisure/education占最低比例)

3. Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something

to say about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information you

select; everyone will do this

differently.(现在我想写两个主体段。我需要选择一些关于每个国家的信息来写。记住，没有规定你要选哪些信息，每个人写出来都是不同的)

4. I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey has

the highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy has

the highest figure for

clothing/footwear.(我在每个类别里找到最高比例的数字：我能看出Turkey在food/drinks/tobacco和education/leisure类别比例都是最高的。Italy在clothing/footwear是最低的)

5. So, I'll write a paragraph about Turkey and

Italy.(因此我用一个段落来写Turkey和Italy)

6. My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and

Sweden.(我最后一段需要描写Ireland, Spain and Sweden)

7. Maybe I'll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first

category, Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the

lowest figures for the first AND second

categories.(可能我会指出Ireland在第一个类别有着最高比重，Spain在education/leisure有着最低比重，Sweden在第一第二类别都是最低)

8. I don't need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trend

in point 2.(我不需要结尾因为我已经在第2段中写了整体趋势)

接下来大家按照Simon的指示，来写一下这篇作文。写好和范文做比较。

完整范文：

The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of

products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country

went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education

category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was

noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The

proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at

4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in

Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer

expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and

just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these

categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.

今天先到这儿，下期见！

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