【易伯华出品】2016年11月26日雅思真题大作文范文

2024-04-26

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【易伯华出品】2016年11月26日雅思真题大作文范文

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Task:Some countries achieve international sporting success by providing

specialized facilities that are only used to train top athletes ,instead of

providing sport facilities that every can use.Do you think this is a positive or

negative development?

【易伯华出品】2016年11月26日雅思真题大作文范文

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Sample answer:

In some countries,players with athletic talent receive more support,

especially in terms of the specialised facilities they used while the demand of

the masses in sports is often ignored. From my perspective, the development of

elite sport may bring a range of benefits in the short term, but mass sport is

more closely related to the well-being of the public in the long run.

【易伯华出品】2016年11月26日雅思真题大作文范文

In the short term, it seems sensible to invest on speclialised facilities for

some excellent sportsmen when considering the positive impacts brought by these

top athletes. From the national level, it is these elites that bring honor in

some international competitions and then shape a strong image for their own

country. On a individual level, the public will be positively influenced by the

sportsmanship revealed by these champions, which will contribute to the

improvement of the quality of the whole nation.

However, in the long run, when pondering the essential reason why sports

exist, we can find out that the prosperity of mass sports is of more

significance and therefore more capital should be allocated to construct

facilities that everybody can use. The most fundamental function of sports is to

assist people to build a strong body, and in some extent, the more sports

facilities there are, the more chances there are for people to take part in

sports in their daily life. Another deeper reason is that people can develop a

host of valuable qualities such as self-control and perseverance in this

process, both of which play an key role on people’s way to achieve success.

So, when comparing the advantages of two sides, I believe this development is

a short-sighted approach regarding to sports success. The public are the base of

a nation. Only when every ordinary person benefits from the sports facilites,

will the development of sports industry be more meaningful.

(308 words)

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