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Teacher’s NOTE:

We may describe the locations of the buildings in the map(s), we may

alternatively create a visitor who is the reader’s avatar and navigates.

With the visitor, it will be a clear route, which enables our reader to

better understand the map.

When there are two maps, one illustrating the past and the other the

present/the earlier past/the future, we make comparisons and find similarities

and differences between the two times.

Turn to Test 4 of Volume 14 of the Cambridge Past Papers, and the

following sample essay is written by the rules stated above.

教师示范

Introduction

Overall, the change of the park is rather obvious, although the general

layout remains.

Body

At present, the north entrance on Arnold Avenue and the south entrance on

Eldon Street remain where they were in 1920, and cars can be parked in the

underground parking in the southeast corner.

A visitor who uses the south entrance will, within the immediate sight,

find a rose garden, which is the replacement of the fountain, in the park’s

center. The garden has seats, surrounding it, on its outside. Meanwhile, neither

the seating nor the rose garden, by the entrance, is kept, and the glasshouse on

the right of the entrance is replaced with a water feature that sits in the

southeast corner.

Turning west at the rose garden, the visitor will find an amphitheater

located where the musical stage, and see another rose garden, which sits the

northwest corner. The removal of seats makes the garden alone in the corner. If

the visitor goes east from the rose garden, the visitor will see a café and the

children’s play area, as the replacements of the third rose garden and the water

plant pond, and seating is no longer available.

conclusion

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