雅思写作知识点(第177期)

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In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world.

Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

老话题，;全球化;大话题下的小分支。

【立场】站「利大于弊」

相似话题：2021.07.03 Today some food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

【段落示范】

【让步+反驳】

1. Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to oppose such a trend for various reasons, among which the most significant one is that this may to some extent hazard our health.

* 弊端：可能对身体有害(这点可以从题干的in season当季食品出发，联想现实生活中的常见话题)

2. This is mainly because some chemicals and preservatives will be added into the imported products for the purpose of guaranteeing their freshness and mouthfeel after the long-distance travel.

* 具体说明：为了保证经过长途运输，食品还能保持新鲜，会添加化学品和防腐剂。

3. Those additives are likely to exert a negative impact on our health.

* 添加剂可能会影响健康。

4. However, such a reason in effect can hold no water.

* 进一步解释：多房征税对缓解住房短缺问题的效果。

5. The quality is ensured, as regulations on those internationally produced products are so strict that only the qualified ones can end up on the market.

* 反驳：食品质量会经过严格管控，对人体有害的食物进不了市场

6. Besides, we now have sundry preservation techniques to cope with the possible losses during long-distance delivery.

* 现有的其他科技可以解决保鲜问题

【解析】

1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 ***

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2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 ***

见文中批注。

3. 词汇(Lexical Resource)

hazard 为及物动词，意思是;冒…的风险;使处于危险;。归类于;通用词;。

preservative 为可数名词，意思是;防腐剂;。归类于;话题高频词;。

mouthfeel 为不可数名词，意思是;口感;。归类于;话题高频词;。

additive 为可数名词，意思是;添加剂;。归类于;话题高频词;。

hold no water 为词组，意思是;站不住脚;。归类于;通用词;。

on the market 为副词词组，意思是;进入市场待售;。归类于;话题高频词;。

delivery 为不可数名词，意思是;运送;。归类于;话题高频词;。

4. 语法(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)

第1句：主句为 it is adj. for sb. to do sth. 的it作形式主语 + among which的定语从句 (which指代前文的reasons) + 定语从句部分含 is that 的表语从句。

第5句：主句 + as引导的原因状语从句(从句部分句型：…so adj. that…)