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Task：Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the

mobile phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing

skill，do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the

internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with

this view.

Firstly, the wide use of “Internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the

declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some

grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper

abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to

their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most

companies. Therefore, many linguists have expressed their concerns that the

instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using

formal written English.

Secondly, the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of

technologies as well. Compared to the older generation, young people today are

cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy

access to wifi, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the

latest information of their idols in another country. However, most social

network deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time way

from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think independently. In

my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as possible because

reading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.

In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much

more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic

performance negatively.

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