2017年4月29日雅思写作真题范文：孩子注意力（易伯华原创）

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本周雅思写作话题：Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to

their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?孩子难以在学习上集中注意力。原因是什么？如何解决？

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It is not uncommon to hear the complaint that children nowadays are easily

distracted from what they are supposed to do in class. The factors responsible

for this problem and feasible solutions accordingly will be analyzed in this

report.

Among all the possible reasons，the excessive application of electronic

products in school should bear the blame. Children born and raised in this

digital age have been accustomed to keeping in touch with the outside world

through their smart phones or iPad. As a result，various social media and mobile

game APPs bring the world closer to them but dampen their enthusiasm on

absorbing knowledge and skills.

To expand their attention span in class and solve this problem，there are some

measures that need to be taken into consideration. It is advisable for

teachers，who usually function as the monitors and managers of the class，to set

rules about phone using. For example，anyone caught using electronic products for

non-academic purposes more than three times will be given an “F”in the final

exam. This can bring an immediate and tangible outcome within a short time.

In addition，distracting students from screens back to the whiteboard is also

a way worth trying. Some activities designed for raising energy level of

students so as to get them better involved in class can be applied wisely，like

role-play，mingling，seminar etc. These kind of activities convert the

traditionally teacher-centered teaching pattern into the student-centered one

and consequently compete with phones for student’s interest and attention.

In conclusion，the abuse of electronic products in the classroom is the root

cause of students' attention issues and the responsibility of sparing students

from this problem falls on teachers.

(295 words)原创来自易伯华黄天枝老师