【雅思开讲啦】手把手7步走 教你在雅思小作文中写出完美长句

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同学们大家好，接下来这节课易伯华的Phoebe老师教大家如何在雅思写作的图表作文中写出长句子。一共分为7个步骤，详情如下：

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一、大家先写出一个简单句，只有主谓结构，即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.

二、添加数词Numbers

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.

三、什么时间?When?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

四、数字是准确的吗?Exactly this number?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

五、添加一个副词Add an adverb

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.

六、以名词结构复述Rephrase with a noun

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在我们有了一个33个单词的漂亮的长句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~

七、现在我们尝试以名词开头来重写这个句子。Can we begin with a noun?

The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

改写成：

There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.

现在已经37个单词啦！37 words now！我不建议写得更长了，it’s a nice long sentence~

总结：

写长句子时常用的7个步骤Here are the 7 steps we used：

1. Basic Fact

2. Number

3. When?

4. Exactly this number?

5. Add an adverb

6. Rephrase with a noun

7. Can we begin with a noun?

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